when i boughta broken heart.and could not find the otherhalf to match you and ofblue and pink. <==== why do you need these two lines?
The poem is completely literally- so those who have never seen my tilly and the wall shirt would have no idea about it- i left it as was for my sake- but if ever read more publicly i would cut those lines.
when i bought
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and could not find the other
half to match you
and of
blue and pink. <==== why do you need these two lines?
The poem is completely literally- so those who have never seen my tilly and the wall shirt would have no idea about it- i left it as was for my sake- but if ever read more publicly i would cut those lines.
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